1 Topic by Fossa (edited by Fossa 2011-06-30 02:24:06)

  • Fossa
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Topic: Tell me what's wrong in this track

so i can make it better

http://soundcloud.com/fossa/bp-demo1


(im also a bit drunk if it's okay but i trust you guysthat i can be drunk trololo)

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  • p-tu
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Re: Tell me what's wrong in this track

+ chords
+ bassline & drums together
+ the bleep sound (sounds weird at first but fits in eventually)

- superdrunk synth that starts around 1:15