Topic: I really don't know where to go from here

I feel like this has the potential to be super cool, but right now it's just weirdly funky.

http://www.mediafire.com/file/0nimmvrqm … tcream.mp3

Re: I really don't know where to go from here

I've tried accessing the file but it comes back with an error message about Java Script?

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Weird... it worked for me....
hmmm..

Re: I really don't know where to go from here

Works here... will try to give it a listen on the way back home.

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I got it to work after closing all the pop ups.  The guitary type funky riff is pretty cool but by having it play all the way through it loses some of it's impact.  What about dropping it out  occasionally and bringing in a chugga chugga 16th note bassline to fill it out or some high string stabs?

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I get the feeling it just needs something more happening. Like when the distorted laughter samples come in, would imo be an ideal time to introduce something different but it just goes on like before.

At about 2:20 if I'm correct I think the distorted riff could be used for a great loop, but instead it just dies out, maybe something you could try?